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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hallo! It's me. Well I have to say it's a good story. Very intriguing how a fire ninja just popped up... named Kakashi. Ohoho...Please continue it. I knew i'd just be left hanging and wondering what will happen next. so please ease my mind and write on!
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ur story was interesting to say the least. i enjoyed the lemon it was good for ur first. i cant wait till the next chapter is posted(HINT HINT)! look forward to it!
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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far hun, now I'll be able to get everything straight!
In the second chapter I was grinning all through the lemon (reading it made me feel like a voyeur). I thought it was funny that in the third chapter you had everyone at one school (if only it were true!!) and that you had saying my real name 'under penalty of death'. Every once in a while Marie will slip up (for some unknown reason), but she appologizes profusely an instant later (^.^). Your errors are dwindling quite nicely, so I applaude you on that.
Love ya hun and keep up the citrus!
the GiR
In the second chapter I was grinning all through the lemon (reading it made me feel like a voyeur). I thought it was funny that in the third chapter you had everyone at one school (if only it were true!!) and that you had saying my real name 'under penalty of death'. Every once in a while Marie will slip up (for some unknown reason), but she appologizes profusely an instant later (^.^). Your errors are dwindling quite nicely, so I applaude you on that.
Love ya hun and keep up the citrus!
the GiR
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ewwwwwwwwwwwwww sorry i had to get that out of my sistem i love you but thats more info then i needed on your sex life i couldnt even read it all becouse well you are like a bro and thats just weird lol but it realy is a good story you do me justice lol well i hope to see what you put on here it better all be realy good lol well i love you blondiebear
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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