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for Unexpected Visitors

by VampireMooglez

person monkey
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story dosen't suck it's awesome update soon and stay motivated don't give up! Update soon!
person SIMba
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dosen't suck. update.
person whitknee
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my word! don't stop!!!! you're story's great so far... it's a little slow progressing so far, but just cuz people says it sucks who cares? boo on them. they don't have to read it. There are people however... like myself... that like this story and want to see where you're taking it... PLEASE DON"T STOP~ more more more more more more more more more! go!~ write more!
person blondiexoxo
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it sucks how u just ended ireally hope that u update like really soon cuz i wanna knnow what happens
person famoos
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please don't stop your story. It doesn't suck at all. Those ppl who said it, they don't know what a good story is. And believe me, your story is waaay good. I really hope that you'll continue this story. Please don't get discourage, k? ^^
person SIMba
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update
person Monkey
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! an update good chapter I can't wait till you update once more! update!
person famoos
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story looks promising. I loved it ^^. I wonder what happened that made Aurora loathed Chris so much. Can't wait to find out. Update soon!
person monkey
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far update soon!