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by VampireMooglez

person lovelyl
schedule December 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was cute. Update when you can. :D
person Onihime1
schedule December 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like where you're going with this and cannot wait to see what you've got in store for Aurora next! Keep up the great work!
person Anon
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow! i remember this story from like forever ago! geeze! i hope you start updating more often! id love to see what happens next!
person MistressLuna
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
When are you updating next? This is too good to stop now.
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wonder why you stop writiing after a few months. I was hoping that you would update soon because this is fantactic! I love this story and please continue. Because I am looking forward to what happens in the next chapter. Please update, I'll wait if I have too because it is amazing.
person maccam
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sad that your own family can be so immature. well i like the story, and i hope you write more!
person Anon
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far, please keep writing
person kat
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't care what others say I want you to continue it!
Trust me when I say I like it! I'm a really really picky reader and it takes alot of things to grab my attention. Your story is one of a few I look forward to for updates on chapters. Your a talented writer.
So please continue.

p.s. screw the others if their being so bitchy...you definately got one fan!
tehe!
person Simple
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please dont stop this story!!!! I love this story. If other people dont like it then they can read something else. But for those people who do like it please continue it. What would we have to do to keep you writing this story???
person maccam
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well i don't think your story suck, i kinda like it. So chris said that he liked her, hmmm i would think that maybe just maybe he can prove it to her somehow. i hope you continue to write your story. besides your writing for yourself not us. update soon.