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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this should be good. ^-^
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July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very good start and it makes me want to read more! I went and peeked at your artwork and it makes anticipate the next chapter even more! I love it!
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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the premise of this story. Very well written, and I like the detail that you go into. Not too much, just enough. I hope you continue this story soon.
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhh *drool* this is so dark and creepy... and i just loved how you ended it!!!!! hmm.. angst.. just what i'm looking for XD haha, anyway, it's a good start! keep up the good work and good luck
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sexy, I can't wait to see Ciro's fate^_^
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June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was the hottest first chapter ever. I can only imagine how incredibly hotter the actual sex is gonna be.
Eagerly awaiting the next chap,
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Eagerly awaiting the next chap,
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