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July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just read this whole story and loved it. It has been really sad for bthem. I hope that you continue the story and can't wait to see how it ends.
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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read all 16 chapters and all I can say is well some. You have really gotten me emotionally vested in this story. I was wondering how she lost her vision or course, and when I found out about her daughter I wondered were she was, but the impact of losing both at the same time, WOW I feel for her. I can't imagine the hurt, and she was just starting to get happy. I hop that she can start to get happy again. VERY POWERFUL WRITING> Also I like the way you go between present day and the past, you have good transitions.
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey you! I love your story. I SO WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!! I only have one comment, when Deidre first moves in with Noah he says that he has 23 days and in the next line it is 43 days. I'll try reading it over sometime this weekend to do a more critical review. :-)
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story, update soon
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
glad you're back! love this story line... please, more!
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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff!
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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You can tell if a story is worth reading by the end of the first chapter. I just read 14 chapters in one sitting. You're onto something here. Good plot, believable characters and a little pain to draw me into the story.
Looking forward to updates.
Looking forward to updates.
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June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aside from the fact that your story has made it easier for me to procastinate (psych exam - ugh), I love what I've read. You've developed (and are developing) a plot that really pulls a reader in, and you've used the flashback technique very effectively. I love the characters, and you've done a top job in writing of the various relationships amongst them. The fact that I was happy to read all 14 chapters in one shot - and barely fidgeted too! - shows just how well-paced and and well-written your fic is. Consider 'Looking Glass' to definitely nbe on my 'Fave' list. Great job, and please continue to update!
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June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice i love it continue to update