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March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, I check very often to see if it has been updated, but it is very frustrating that an author doesn't update when they say they will. I really want you to update this story soon, I want to know what happens between Ozzy and Monika.
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December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I remember reading this story a while ago and being pissed cause it wasnt finished. I finally decided to re-read it and tell you to keep working on it already. However, now that I've gone over it again, I have realized it is crap. C. R. A. P. Crap. Crappity crappity crap. So, I've decided to flame you instead. Your story sucks, and you should crawl off the face of the earth and die. Also, where the hell did you come up with a name like "the inflated taco"? You are so fucking stupid.
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December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 started off okay and I was beginning to feel bad about my last review. Then I kept going. Guess what? I don't feel bad about flaming you anymore. While chapter 2 wasn't as bad as chapter 1 (nothing could POSSIBLY be as bad as chapter 1), it still sucked. Have I damaged your ego enough so that you will stop writing? I hope so. Bitch.
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it, and i'm waiting on more ^_^ Oddly Oz reminds me of a friend of mine... - the coke though.
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this story
i find it humorous
you write good
more please!!!
keep it up!
i find it humorous
you write good
more please!!!
keep it up!
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it, please continue.
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Come'on!! Update, please? I don't know what you did, but I have become addicted to this story. I check to see if it has been updated everyday, so please fufill my fondest wish and update with a long and awesomely detailed chapter.
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving it so far!
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really need you to update, I keep thinking about the story and all the ways it could go. So please update!!
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August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I noticed that in the first chapter, during the "Lunch" section, you change the spelling of Jelly's name to 'Gelly.' I just wanted to point that detail out.
Good luck with the rest of your story!
Good luck with the rest of your story!