rate_review Reviews

Good story. Sorry to see it end.

This is a very interesting story. At first i didn't think i would like it. But it turned out really good. You have me hooked, can't wait for more..

i'm completely rooting for pel and tan. sorry to say but i can't STAND odyn, she is so obnoxious and annoying! i know she's supposed to be like a child but every time she starts insulting pel or whining i wish that she'd suddenly die in a horrible violent accident LOL. but she does spice up the plot. your story is so great and i'm dying to know what happens next. :)

glad you got these two guys back on track you had us all worried !!! And yeah, comparing the young dragon to a child was a good way for us to understand her---put bigger rocks in her sand !!!!!

Aww. ^_^ YAY! FINALLY! <3<3

Pel needs to get away while the getting is good. All he'll be is hurt by Tan and the dragons and the awful people who take care of them. They are all such unbelievale snobs. I like Pel's charater, but Tan being so purposely hurtful I don't like him, and Odyn is such a whiny, childish brat I can't stand her. I know she is suspose to be young, but yuck. Pel has no place here. The dragons don't like him, the people there don't like him and Tan is too much a spinless weakling to stand up for him. Not only does Tan not stand up for him, he joins them in tearing Pel apart and he knows better, but does it anyway. Yuck.

awww you can't leave it there, i really enjoyed this and i hope you add more soon

Tan is such a shit sucking asshole! Talk about emotional abuse! Pel does not deserve that kind of treatment. Pel needs to buck up and leave Tan's sorry ass. It is not like Tan would miss him any, much less care. Maybe Tan will fall off his dragon and die.

Aw... Oh, nos!

THEY MUST MAKE BEAUTIFULL, SWEET MANLOVE!

Continue soon!