rate_review Reviews

Finished your story. Loved it. Left me wanting more. Fun and a great job. Xoxo Robin

I'm only a few chapters in but I love this story. I love the matter of fact tone and the humor. Had to comment since it's so fun. Xoxo Robin

Such a well written story. Pel gets a happy ending. And so does Tan. Very nicely done. Pel's relationship with his dragon is much stronger than Tan's relationship with his dragon. Fry is sweet and caring. He is much more considerate and trustworthy. I was really beginning to worry about Pel before Fry showed up. I thought it would certainly take one more week long trip for Tan to be gone and come home to find that all the dragons of the village had ganged up and eaten Pel. I thought you were moving in that direction for a while.

Haha~ All things end sadly, poor Odyn being dominated by Pyr n all. XD I think i spelled his name right. -checks- whoops, Fyr. I can't wait to see if Fyr will really mount Malyt..... OOOOOO i can see a one shot. Wonder if you'll do a one shot on it whether Malyt finds a bond mate or not. The possibilities are endless. Sequel! Sequel!

Wow this story was so great! I realize its long been over but still, it was a fun read. I like the bonding concept you have, it was a little different to what I was expecting but it was good :D

Hi.
I actually liked this story, but... Pleeeeease stop telling everything your are going to write in the start of the chapter... I like to be suprised, and it is also possible to put the author notes in the end of the chapters, and at least give the reader the chance to figure out what it is about first on their own.

And dont worry about if it contains the you know what scenes. I prefer to read a good story, with out the "hot" scenes, then a bad story with them (hey if i can get bouth, yay me, but you cant always get everything)

otherwise a good story, eventhough you cut it a bit short. It screams for a sequel:-)

nice. wish had more of an ending though.

I have to say that this is one of the better stories I have found on Adultfanfiction. Much better the PWP, it actually has a story to it, but also has great sex scenes. I was really sad about the ending though. It seemed like you just got bored with writing the story and decided to end it instead of continuing. Either that or you ran out of inspiration for where to take the characters.

Although you have finished the story, I'm hoping that sometime in the near future you plan to continue the story in a sequel at the very least. Or maybe a prequel, explaining more about Rynor and what happened with the whole dragons inslaving humans thing. That sounded kind of interesting, but you didn't really elaborate on it very much.

Overall, great story. Thanks for the reading material.
Kynn

Eeeeeeeeeeeeee. Hot and super! awesome. <3<3<3 I lurve you~

SEQUEL! SEQUEL!!