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for Intimate Begginings

by SilkenOrgasm

schedule March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
muy bueno, espero que pronto actualicas, ana maria
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...

A bunch of typos, I immediately noticed right off (possibly from uploading, I don't know). Other than that, it was pretty seductive and direct. Not bad.

Keep it up. I'd like to read more.
person ichinichi
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh, update will you?? Please? I am now craving this story! ^-^
person Aniona
schedule June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gaah, that's hot. please continue!
person LR
schedule June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Quite stimulating so far, please continue...like to find out where this is going next