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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good story so far interesitng character development going on here. But don't beat the submssmisive pony to death switch it up a bit. Is alex gonna get some (please say yes if it wit kaite ill b ur biggest fan)update asap
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was a hot chapter as usual. i couldn't help but picture beth and dave in bed, it would be like battle of the wills, who could out-do who. great stuff, i look forward to the next update!!
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the story, but with the way you described beth I couldn't picture a regular guy like Dave to match her strength. Beside that, I love the story so far.
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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to see what the four of them will do next.
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July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What an awsome story, I can't wait to read more!
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July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's a great story, hope you post again soon. Haven't read anything this good since, Bill Bradley.
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July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really would love to be able to read this story, but the complete lack of paragraphs makes it impossible. I know it's your story, so it's up to you how you write it, but I think you're losing out on potential readers by this total lack of formating.
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June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Definitely interesting storyline :)
I can't wait to see where this is going and what happened to that Amy girl.
If she was murdered or not because she became inadequate and lazy or not.
Or something of such.
Maybe the Boy Maid's mistresses will turn out to be cold blooded heartless people?
Who knows.
Anywho, keep writing.
Can't wait :)
I can't wait to see where this is going and what happened to that Amy girl.
If she was murdered or not because she became inadequate and lazy or not.
Or something of such.
Maybe the Boy Maid's mistresses will turn out to be cold blooded heartless people?
Who knows.
Anywho, keep writing.
Can't wait :)
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June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
bye bye
bye bye
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June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
post soon
bye bye
bye bye