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O. MY. FUCKING. GOD!
The greatest story I have read on this site...(I Think)
GJ GJ GJ GJ

heh nice just really nice

Man, that was awesome stuff. I've read through the whole thing in one go and I was plenty turned on after the first sexual encounter. You've got a good flowing style, but you need to get someone to proof-read for spelling errors. Mistakes spoil the flow of a story.
Other than that, I think that Chris is too submissive for his own good. While the prospect of fucking every pussy in sight is an appealing thought, the character doesn't 'grow' much through-out the story. However you cover that well with the experience Chris builds up through each session.
Bravo.

That was one of the hottest stories I've ever read. Good job.

I love your stories! especially this one they're... hot. I hope you write a Beth/David one I think they would be so hot together.

This is probably the best erotic story I have ever read! You are a great author and paint the picture so well. Great work on this one and I hope to read more of your work soon!

Absolutely outstanding. Probably the best story i've read here on AFF and i've been here a long, long time.

Hope to see many more stories of a similar sort (even the same plot!) in the future.

Fantastic work mate.

Thank u 4 fufilling my request exellent lemon can't wait 4 the next installment

Hey,
I've read all the story and cant wait till the sequal. I really wish I could be a freakin Boy Maid...god that would be fucking HOT! *dreamy eyed* thanks for the kicks and laughs, and blow jobs, and rim jobs, and unbelieveable sex. Thanks you....keep it up yo. LoL

awesomeness as usual, loved the part about dave and beth! too cute.