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by Evania

person Celery22
schedule January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, so I was just over at Beyond Charms reviewing that and looking at the other reviews I noticed that you're also the writer of this story! Quite a shock, I first read this story probably 6 months ago or so and I loved it. I really think you're a great writer and I'm glad to see that, according to your profile, you're getting or trying to get stuff published. You definately deserve it! If there's any way you can say leave a link in your profile or even E-mail/IM me a link to any published stuff you have, I'd love to read it.

Now on to my review for this story specifically. This is one story that I absolutely fell in love with. I'm not exactly a Ren-geek myself, but I am a LARPer(live action role player). I'm more into the safety of boffer, amtgard specifically, but all the same I love the whole Ren scene. I love your school society, it's very interesting how it's divided up. Your characters I'm afraid I'm a bit fuzzy on, but as I mentioned in my earlier review of Beyond Charms, I love how your characters are so real. They aren't just actor's following a script, they have their own wants and desires.

Once again, you're a great writer and I want to sicerely thank you for your writing. Reading stories like these are great ways to really make my day, so thank you.
schedule May 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! i would soo very much like to see a continuation of this story to see where the plot goes. It has me enthralled and in awe. please continue it
person todraw13
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like it the RenGeeks is cool
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is great so far. I'm really liking the RemGeek idea! You're wonderful.
person Michiru Loves Haruka
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad at all, no sireee! A very strong blast of. You just GOT to update more..

I wanna see were those two are heading.
person TC
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the concept of the RenGeek. Kickass, lost-in-their-own-little-world-but-that's-okay-they-like-it-there, geeks. I also like the direction that you seem to be leading the story, by introducing an amalgam character to really screw over the clique-ridden school. Obviously, Lori can kick a fair amount of ass too, which I look forward to seeing (as I'm almost certain will occur, perhaps on Brittany... ::hint hint:: ). Anyway, good job and I can't wait to see more.
person h
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome please continue
person ^CH^
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, man, I rather like your story. Keep it up!

Don't be too down with the lack of reviews, it happens. But yeah, update! ^^
person ryvik
schedule June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi ! i'm ryvik her on the 'site and i just read all you posted so far, and i must say i love it !
i like the way your write, it flows very well and i can't wait to know what's gonna happen next !!