rate_review Reviews

aaah! no! how does the prince turn the puppy back into a boy!
i need to know dammit!
*bangs head against wall*
why are all of your stories left off in the middle?
*squints at screen suspiciously*
youre sadistic arent you.
you probly get off on the PAIN AND SUFFERING OF YOUR READERS
...
yeah.

-ariesgirl

p.s. i love J.D. he is singularly the greatest person ever.

p.p.s. pleeeeeeease have Nick and him screw like bunnies.

Interesting little group of characters you sketched there. I like all three of them, for some reason they kinda seem… familiar. I like the switching third person/diary style too. I’m curious to read more about them.

J.D. is just tooooooo cute. Awww he is in love with... god. I don't remember his name. Yeah I just saw it too. GOD! Why do I forget so easily! The puppy. There we go.

Really good! I cant wait until the next chapter comes out! Nice work =]

Great beginning to the story, waiting to read more, I know you have written the next two chapters, so get them the fuck up there!!!

This is so cool. I like the whole switching between diary entries and third person prose. Despite it making it slightly disjointed, switching between the two, it still manages to flow smoothly. If that makes sense, which it probably doesn't. It also gives good insight into what the writer of the diary entry is thinking, so you could probably have some fun with that, them saying one thing in the prose section and then saying something completely different and insulting in the diary entry. It's good. -Nodnod- Yeah, what else? Umm... The characters! They're great, even though it's early days and there's not much known about them, it's still possible to get a good grasp of their personalities. Which is a definite plus. And the idea is original too, with regard to the style anyway, so unless I'm mistaken, they're won't be many, if any, other pieces like this.

I dunno what else to say now. But, I do look forward to seeing the future chapters. And I think I made sense in this review, sorta. Heh, anyway, keep up the good work.

Leon.

I love them. Myra reminds me of my anger friend Megan. Scary.. they both scare me. I love I love! Sorry.