rate_review Reviews

Hey, great story! This really made me think! Have you ever seen Six Degrees of Separation? Neither have I, but the idea of the movie is that 'if a person is one step away from each person they know and two steps away from each person who is known by one of the people they know, then everyone is an average of six "steps" away from each person on Earth'. This reminds me of that... Wow, that was long!

Anyhow, even though I read your work, I don't condone most of the stuff, but I love your work. You're a fabulous writer and I'm a big fan!!!

I can't get off to this. This makes me cry.

I'm crying.

But I still love your stories.

But. I'm crying.

This is heartbreaking.

Ingenious plot; lovely piece of writing. Nicely done!

oh my god. oh my god. oh my god. oh my god. oh my god. oh my god.

I\'m actually torn on how to review this. First off, I think it is poor as a sex story in general, since there were only vague descriptions, but I also think that erotica is not the correct section. It seemed to me to be deeper than baseless sex stories. I myself, have been a link in a similar chain such as this before, and it is quite painfull, mentally and otherwise, which is why this story cut rather deep with me. I\'m not sure of its intentions, whether the peice was merely a sex story, or an artistic portrayal of cycles of abuse, and as such, I\'m not rating it because I\'m not quite sure where I stand. This story stood out to me though, and generally, I\'m a tough critic since I write professionally and have been through tough trials with my writing, so that\'s really saying something to really be noticed. Keep on writing, ~Leafy

Not bad. I normally don\'t like slash at all, but this was pretty good.