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for Phantom Lover

by WickedDelights

person ravinder
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like where this is going, so i'm guessing that you're gonna have to update soon!
person Anon
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you have seriously got to wright more of this story, good job so far
person melody fate
schedule June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start, but it really does need more.
person RavenAssassin
schedule June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
umm...good start but i\'m a little itsy bit confuzzled...at the beginning, she know who he is or anything? Was she expecting him or anything like that?? It says \"phantom lover\" so i assumed she doesn\'t know who he is??? errr...you kinda jumped right into it, no opening scene or information beforehand =) I still think it\'s pretty good though =) hope to see a long update soon! ^_^
person Loopypants
schedule June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More please! I\'m dying here.
person aquamum
schedule June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YUM
More Please!!!!