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for Betrayed

by Fiona123

schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A new chapter. This is one of the few stories I am constantly checking for updates, therefore I am LOVING IT! Keep it going it's great and I really love how it hasn't jumped into sex (not that those kinds of stories are bad! ; D but sometimes you need a great read and this is definetly a good read!) Looking forward to more!
person BelieveInMe
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't really say whether or not I like the story, I haven't read enough to decide. I have a feeling as the story goes on I will like it, it intrigues me, but at times the wording is confusing. Continue though, I'd like to see where it leads.
person monkey
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story update soon!
person inner_glow
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is awesome keep updating please. YAY! More detailed goodness.
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am definetly enjoying it! Please keep going!