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December 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, but do you realize that you just made Mike rape her?
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hold on did he rape her?
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Urgh! He raped her? Oh God, what a *beep*ing a$$hole (excuse my swearing), :(
You need to update asap!.
You need to update asap!.
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WTF he raped her. damn! i wanted her first time to be...not like that. wow i'm floored.
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gosh i just want to hug her. please update soon!!!! who cares about cara. she gave him up.
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice job. keep up with the good work.
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, update please, Mike seems kind of freaky, lol reminds me of this boy who wants to date me but he is 7 years older then me and I'm only 16, ahhhh he scares me! well UPDATE now please need to read more..
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, i do want them together, i hope they share a kiss soon :P
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July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update !! I wanna know why it's titled "betrayed" o0o :P
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June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Best chapter yet. Keep them coming!!!