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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I realize this story was written a couple years ago, but was thinking that perhaps you should open it up and have someone else continue it even if you don't want to. There is so much that can be done with this to further stimulate the senses for an eye popping read. Deki shouldn't die since we sort of like him, maybe there can be some sort of heroic hunter in the woods that saves him from the awful beast. Would be nice =)
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April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! Poor Deki; I can't imagine how I would feel in his place. Terrific story, however! Thank you!
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December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was good. Is there going to be anymore?
~alexsei~
~alexsei~
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oo lol loved it
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June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
>.>
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June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
One of the best stories I've read in my life. The subject is for a limited audience unfortunately (bestiality) but as a fan of more 'different' stories, I can highly appreciate this story.
I really like your writing style. Can't wait to read more of your work.
I really like your writing style. Can't wait to read more of your work.
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June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know. For some reason, I feel as though the Beast needs love!! Or lots of ass. Either works. >.> Poor Deki though...That had to hurt. >.< I must say I found it amusing though. >.> I <3 tentacle stuff! XD It was very good and very graphic (made my own butt hurt at the thought of it...) and I hope you write a second chapter or decide to continue this story.
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June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start! ACTION - draws the reader in and makes us care what happens next. Good work!
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June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story. i hope it would have sequel.