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December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was really hot and I loved the premise. I love all the little details too, like the steaming hot water and the oil beading across his skin. I also liked the idea of a spoiled and coddled rich kid, being taught a lesson by a grim and powerful gladiator! Wonderful writing, really!
I would love it if you continued this, but it’s an excellent one-shot never the less.
I wanted to let you know, since I sometimes make these kinds of mistakes too:
He didn't now that his master's son, Aiden, would be included as part of the reward.
He didn't know that his master's son, Aiden, would be included as part of the reward. :D
I would love it if you continued this, but it’s an excellent one-shot never the less.
I wanted to let you know, since I sometimes make these kinds of mistakes too:
He didn't now that his master's son, Aiden, would be included as part of the reward.
He didn't know that his master's son, Aiden, would be included as part of the reward. :D
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very well written.
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November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O wow. I do believe this has become my favorite from your works that I have read so far. Yes, it has. Onward I go to put this in recommended readings! XD
Also, I think you are now considered one of my favorite authors too. ^^
Also, I think you are now considered one of my favorite authors too. ^^
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June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story.. Capture me.. I do hope you add more too it.. Aiden seems he just needed someone to love...
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June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. You should write more to it. I like Achillus and Aiden\'s characters. They\'re..well, they\'re cool.
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June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An interesting scene. Definitely kept my attention. Hope you do write more.