rate_review Reviews

I've noticed that you put 'miss' instead of 'mess' you did it in your other story too.

Okay!! This is really fun!!!

It's like a really interesting episode of NCIS
made so because you write well, (very important)
nice banter, sexy yet serious characters, and a
serial killer on the loose!!! FUN! FUN! FUN!

Thanks,
R

I like it. All creepy mysterious.

you need a beta

Glad you finally updated this, I look forward for more(^_^)

If you got someone to beta this, fix your errors and strange grammar, etc- I might actually read this. Until then, it isn't finished enough for you to expect people to read it.

If you care enough about your story, you'll at least proof read it. Some of it may have been your own lack of knowledge but several times they were just clear typos.

It's sad that 70 percent of the fics on this site are like this. Often they may be interesting but they're so hard to read it isn't even worth it. Not that this is the worst I've seen. This is Shakespeare compared to some of the stuff out there.

ohhh please please update!! u r a fabulous writer and i love ur story, it is sooo good!! and yes i am well aware i am sucking up and do a shitty job at it. but i do luv your story

Great start.. think i\'m hooked already

Very cool beginnings. Hope you continue soon. You need to get a BETA

This is really nice. Well written. Can\'t wait to see more.