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for Lydia's Dad--Summer Vacation

by murdertramp

person maccam
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And thats when i would have let is slip (i love you) wow i really hope they both could look past the age thing. I'm curios will they let the others know??? damn few more chapters left (cries).
person Lozz
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It's just the right mix of plot and smut. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next update.
person aimee
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my god i ove this fic, i canthelp but keep reading it, its so awsome great plot, i just wanna know how it ends so badley and are you doing another after this one?, im so hooked!, do you have any fiction anywhere else on the net?

keep up the amazing work!

aimee
person arohalove
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I totally stumbled onto this story. By stumbled I mean I never come on this site and I never read anything here but somehow I found myself lurking around in this section and your story was the first I picked to read...and I love it! I just read all of Lydia's Dad, then Graduation and now Summer Vacation and girl, its like my fantasy come to life! (what girl hasn't crushed on an older man-or isn't crushing at the moment...sigh) Of all the stories to pick out of a hat to read I'm so glad it was yours. Besides all the sex, the interaction between characters is honest, thier conversation real, the issues and complications in ALL the relationships are believable and the two main characters are so likable - even at their worst and most confused - that you can't help but understand and feel for them. You've done a great job. I'll be looking for the next three chapters. :)
person maccam
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw why can't she go with??? really only three chaps left :O i really want them to be together, maybe somehow wil could let it slip anout them???
person Anon
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter, I can't wait for the next one.
person M -Viktoria-
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* chapter 7, my favorite so far.
I have been sneak reading for along time, not reviewing *hides* but I will let you know now, that this story still rocks my socks off.
Keep it coming girly, we're lovin' it.
-M-
person t.k
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know what, I dont even care if there wasnt any sexi n this chapter. This story has gotten so good I'm reading only to see where the plot will go. (ok so that is a bit of a lie :P) But honestly, this story is great. I enjoyed the bit with Quinn. Rather hilarious. I must say I did laugh out loud at a few points. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
person maccam
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that there was no sex, lol anyway so thats how Grant see it, man thats going to hurt her cause i feel she loves him. age is just a number, it's how you feel about that person is what counts.
person t.k
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story... This whole series. There is just something so captivating about it. You are able to include it all humour, sex, drama. I love it so much. Please, keep going. This story is so great. Your writing style is wonderful and rarely do I see any errors. I'm so attracted to the forbiddenness of the relationship within your story. Great character development. I really am able to understand the various emotions. Keep up the suberb work!