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Awww it was like Billy and Joe (The men in my head that share apartment number 2. They are in love and just don't know it yet. Yes I have an apartment building in my head!)

Very few stories can keep me interested and really beg for more. This is one of those stories. Love it.

Very sexy fic. Love where jockboy spies on Jace. His reaction to seeing him half dressed like that was pretty realistic...

I love this story, and the others you have written. You have great talent in writting. Only one thing that could improve... Just wish they were longer. You have me hooked..

Ch. 5:

Wow.. guess I missed a chapter! Nice intro to action chapter - short and sweet and with a bit of doubtful foreshadowing (but if I run to the next chapter, I suppose I'll find out how true/nontrue it was! )

Now then 6: gotta think this one through. There's definitely some idea of where you want to go here. You've gracefully went straight to the initial contact.. keeping the story light to an extent just by virtue of how it's fairly uncomplicated. That suits it and is carrying on with the beginning. The main character's emotional issue of being upset at what he's done should be neat to watch how it impacts him later on (oh yeah, that sentence made sense!) and I look forward to see what his "beau" has in mind. I half had expected him to pull back and say "Umm.. I'm straight!" *L* but thankfully you didn't do that.

Looking forward to more!

Awe! How sweet. There\'s more here and more and more. Things are developing at a perfect pace. Very nice wording, well handled subject matter, looking forward to more! I\'m glad I got a chance to keep an eye on this and can\'t help but wonder what you\'ll do with these two boys. :) Looking forward to another chapter!

And you know... it\'s a good tie in for the rest. I really am enjoying the way you\'re going about telling a story. And there\'s more! I hadn\'t thought to check your section today, but I\'m rather glad I did. Nicely done, I really enjoyed the end sentence, tied in everything the story is about and gave us teh crux of the matter, being a superstar and yet, being so much not. Poor boy, his life would be amazingly easier if he were allowed to just have a bit of a dream here and there.

Looking forward to seeing where you go with this one! :)

Gasp. Okay.. so now I\'ve just toddled on over to here. Hee hee. How fun! And everything in bite size pieces that when I\'ve not much time, I can catch up to it all! (Rather, I feel I\'m lucky to get in on the ground floor of your writing and not have to run to catch up on three year\'s worth.)

Very nice! I love the secret idolization to gay sport stars and the way you give a wonderful look into how life might be, to have so much and yet find one\'s self without the ability to express what so many of us are driven to - a close relationship with another person. I gotta run to chapter two to see what wrenches you\'re going to throw in his path! Wheeee!

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ch. 2: Awe... now that chapter was just cute. Big ol\' Warren wandeirng around with a goofy grin plastered on his forehead (even if he was trying to hide it otherwise).

I look forward to finding out who Jace is... he wasn\'t as nearly fleshed out so I\'m sure it\'s only a matter of time. Beautiful! You\'re really done a fabulous job on all of this. The stories are fairly easy to follow - but it\'s the writing style that I\'m so enamored with. You\'ve definitely got a world-tone to the writing that has an approachability that\'s not often seen, as well as a marvelous command of the topic and how you\'ll be explaining it.

Looking forward greatly to more!