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June 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Really good story, good characters and development. I was a bit disappointed with the epilogue, though. You tried to cover too much in too small a space. It's OK to just end a story with the end of a phase in the characters' lives. The reader can imagine whatever they like, and it leaves things open for you to write another story with the same characters if you get a sudden inspiration.
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August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story and the development of characters. Even the weird tying up at the end was ok!
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this! I like high school yaois and it is refreshing take on the poor football closet star!
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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really awesome! I read the whole thing today and loved it. Great job.
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May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done although I found the ending abrupt.
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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. I missed all these updates and now is sad because the story is over.. Great Job on it and thank you for sharing...
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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Wonderful interaction between everyone. A little scary about the black truck that had followed Warren towards the end, don't quite understand what that was about.
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December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is great. Well written, minus some typos, well thought out. It doesn't go overboard on each chapter. You keep things interesting. So interesting I basically read all 21 chapters in a row. I couldn't stop that is! It's great. I look forward to reading more of this as you write it!
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December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow!
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October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yea youre back!!