rate_review Reviews

This is a very interesting story. I do hope to see more updates soon...

I posted it before, but I really really do love your story. I'm a bit attached to your characters, so I loved this chapter and seeing them together. I'm actually another story about a transexual character and so I've kind of been a bit curious but this last chapter kind of pushed me to look up transexuals and the surgery, just like Joe Vic did. I actually found a very interesting website with all sorts of information. Including post-op sex, which was kind of what made me wonder enough to look it up.

The site I found was actually pretty interesting and quite detailed. It talked about the surgery and showed drawings what is done and then it had lots of post-op pictures. It also talked about several well-known transexuals. They also had a section on post-op sex, which what I was looking for. I was mainly wondering if say Joe and Rue stayed together, if even after surgery they would be able to have an enjoyable sex-life. They go into detail about that and also have a personal account from a woman who went through the procedure. I doubt I'd be able to do that, I have too an extreme aversion to pain, but I guess it's worth it in the end to feel like you're who you should be.

Anyways I'm really appreciating Joe Vic, especially after the latest chapter in the other story I'm reading. It's not the same situation, but he could have reacted badly anyways and he didn't. Good man. And good story, so I can't wait for your next update.

Ch. 8: Well! And Joe, just like any red blooded, motor headed male, has managed to be all sweet and uncomplicated and not over think anything. You really gotta love that about the man. He is a delightful character and I'm so glad you've made him so.

Now then - one "problem" somewhat .. faced, solved? we shall see! I do look forward to discovering just what you're about to do with this. You've done awesomely so far and it can only get better, I'm sure!

This is a very interesting story. I do hope you keep up with it.

I didn't realize I had mnissed so many ch. This was really good. I mean I knew I wanted them to do the deed but the way you described it just made it so real. I actually got uncomfortable because I started to go through the feelings with Joe Vic. I mean it is one thing to say it's all okay but it is quite another thing to be confronted by your girlfriend's dick. I think Joe was very sensitive and after reading this i don't knwo if I would have been quite so accepting. i probably would have freaked out first. Great descriptions.

I _adore_ this fic. The way you write isn't all cliche and and overused sounding (like fics on aff tend to be), the characters are really likable, also without being cliche, and I like the interaction between Rue and Joe Vic. And I like how Joe's this huge guy... People tend to write guys as these unrealistic, skinny, ultra femmy guys, which gets old fast. I'd really love if you put some sex in here. Please keep this up!

6: I am saying the only reason this story isn't getting the attention it deserves is because of teh time of year and because the site is still iffy. Otherwise, it would be swimming in them. What a delightful story so far. Very sweet images and great writing to transport them to the mind! You really have a handle on your characters in this one. And this chapter is just another promising show of what more there is to come.

Dinner! ooo... and how Joe Vic's going to deal with the knife issues... that should be very interesting! You're doing amazingly well!

Ch. 7: Beautiful way of giving us the crux of teh entire story! Very well executed and not overly done in the least bit.

I'm definitely looking forward to more. This story is marvelous.

Ch. 4:

I have to say, it seems you\'ve got a real touch with this one. The character are disparate enough to add a spice and a good off handed tension all ready to the story. It\'s aided this story very well and one can tell that by the way you\'re style is staying constant, that it\'s working really well for you.

Hee hee.. gotta run and read the next chappie!

Ch. 5:

Very nice chapter. It\'s interesting to get past the \"comfort\" stage into something more meaty. To learn about how they\'re both looking at one antoher. Should prove very interesting where you go with this! Loving it and the writing and just everything about it! And I hope aff.net gets more traffic soon, so you can start to be read like you would have been months ago! :) Beautifully done!