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for By Chance

by SC182

person Michiru Loves Haruka
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One HELL of a good job, this is one FINE finale chapter!
I LOVED what Joe Vic did to Rick and his croonies, especially what he did to Rick 'cause rapist and such should not have the privilege/gift of reproducing no need to spread bad genes!!

Anyway once again welldone *runs of to check if your other fics are as good as this one*
person Michiru Loves Haruka
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EVIL CLIFFHANGER! *glares at it* Awesome chapter, great work on the tension in it, it was palpable.

I'll be hanging tight till your next update.
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you are continuing with this. That was a cute scene in the hospital, I could practically see Joe Vic flexing his muscles in agitation. I can hardly wait for the last part. Congrats on getting so close.
person Shaznay
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope Joe Vic beats the piss out of Rick and his goonies. So glad Rue is awake, hope she gets better and they both have a happy ending.
person Anon
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Joe is a great guy!
person Michiru Loves Haruka
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GREAT job with the new chapters

hm! That asshole Rick AND his croonies need a good trashing... I wanna see lots of blood and gore, I wanna see broken bones and jaws, I wanna see mangled cocks too!!!

Hope you update soon bye *waves*
person Anon
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
rick needs to get the shit beat out of him!
person myoregon
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I just spent all night reading your story. I couldn't put it down. It's just so bitter sweet. I'm in love with your characters and rooting for a happy ending.
person Scribbles05
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh how sad! They beat the pulp out of Rue AND raped her? Those bastards. I hope she comes out of this okay. So glad Mary is cool with Rue's secret.
person Maddie
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. Read it all in one go, couldn't stop :). Now I can't wait to read more.