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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You need some help on your grammer. A BETA would help and this story could be good.
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is really interesting and different. keep it up. i like it alot
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the new Chapter. Perfect as usual! ^.^ So I guess that Flame will be making his entrance soon? Yay! I liked the fluffyness of this chapter! It made me squee.
Kali
Kali
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! Please please write more soon I cant wait to read more about stormcloud and eclips
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!!!! The Plot is really good too, and Eclipse and Stormcloud are just adorable!!! Also I get the feeling that Flame will be an interesting villan. And the way Blaze reacts to Stormcloud is funny, kinda like how an older brother talks about his annoying younger brother. Squee!!!!
Okay, now that my evil fan girl moment is over, I like how detailed you are in your people. Also there are little-to-no grammer mistakes here, so that just makes the read so much more enjoyable. Thank you for writing this story!! ^.^V.
Kali
Okay, now that my evil fan girl moment is over, I like how detailed you are in your people. Also there are little-to-no grammer mistakes here, so that just makes the read so much more enjoyable. Thank you for writing this story!! ^.^V.
Kali