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Yeah! I am so glad you updated! Awwww wow! What a hero! That poor girl!

Hello! First of I feel you when it comes to moving the story. I moved mine to Romance when I realized it just didn\'t fit in the Erotica section. I meant for it to fit but the story has a mind of it\'s own and so I didn\'t get as Erotic as I planned. I\'ll definetly be following this story, wherever it goes. Great job and hope to read more.

Awwwww how bittersweet! I am sure things will get better though.

Gooooooooooood story!!! Enjoyed it from day one! Love reading great stories like this! Hope to read more of your work!

Truly magnificent. I only wish I can reach your level. Your expertise of totaling controlling the setting is awe worthy. The language was kept to that of what one thinks the people of old sounded like. And being raised in a male family I appreciate the scenes of violence. Even this you did spectacularly. You made it sound bloody and gruesome like war is but somehow poetic. But another I admire is that you didn’t over do the blood though. I like blood spray as much as the next person but it gets dull and repetitive when a author can’t keep it fresh sounding. But you managed the very difficult. You also have two very erotic scenes without the repetitiveness I find so often in other authors’ writing. I have fought with this especially. Do you have any advice for an aspiring erotica author? If so you know my address. Adios!!!

very hot i love it!!!

Have you ever listened to music as you read a story like this one? Try listening to Erykah Badu\'s \"On And On\" while reading your latest chapter. Made it a overwhelming experience. Her powerful voice and your words, greatness. I am enjoying your story tremendously and hope to read more of your work. Write more! Truly amazing.

I\'m really liking what i\'m reading. Look forward to the next upadate

Awwww that was too sweet!! Hehehe I sure hope you update soon! I love a good sex scene. lol.

Ohhhh me like!!! I love dark heroes!!! I prefer them to the knight in shining armor types. Please update soon!!!