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for Pride and Punishment

by MakaiKitty

person Cindyip
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dannu does have such an interesting way of having things get done to him(^_~)
person Cat
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Have I ever told you that I love the way you write? I adore your stories. Danne, you jerk, you deserved to suffer! And who better to make you suffer than Tamall! Dark and haunting and yet strangly amusing to see Danne reduced to that. I feel slightly bad for him because Tamall is crazy, but not that much. I really liked how you chose to write this. We only ever see Danne from Connie's point of view. That's not bad a thing, but it's always interesting to read something from the bad guy's point of view. ^^ Good job! I love your stories! <3
person Sjonna
schedule June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hiya! For some reason, this has put an insanely wide grin on my face. And it also seems everything I was expecting from Tamall\'s forplay was there. Not sure it\'s a good thing, but I\'m glad that Danne\'s on the recieving end.

Dear gods, I\'m turniung into a vindictive bitch, aren\'t I? Oh, well! ^_^

Til next time,

--Sjonna
person Rosie
schedule June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Isn\'t it wonderful how completely irrational and all-consuming revenge is?
I\'m sure Tamall appreciates it. ^_^
YES! finally the little spoiled brat is the victim! hah! Now you know how Conn felt, asshole! Oh, and I liked the little parallel between Danne calling Conn a slut, and being CALLED a slut.
Insane people make me happy. xD

woot! straight-jacket dance! wait... I don\'t know how to draw that with computer symbols... oh well.
thanks again, oh master of the pen!
(and no, I did not mean to ryme. ack)
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Danne\'s a slut, Danne\'s a slut!! *cough* XD ANYway...yeah, well. If you were going for harsh punishment...then you certainly succeeded. Who ever knew the noble Danne liked it rough, eh? Very....verrrrrry rough....ouch...dang. Lot\'s of blood. The knives scared me...but Tamal, in his own, scary, insane way....is kind of....amusing. I like him. XD Maybe it\'s just because he finally the spoiled golden child as he deserved buuuut....honestly, I think they could have a lovely future together. Rotfl. xD Ahem. Yeah. Seriously though, looking forward to whatever you have planned next! Until then......whahaha.

(Sorry, it\'s a bit late, forgive the slightly insane and not-quite-literate review. :gonk: ^^;)

-Moonstar