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I love how this story is going so far don't give up on it your writing is awesome and you have a great imagination to think stuff like this up.

This is so good. Please write more soon.

Yay! You updated! Wow this was a great chapter. Hehehe when Kayne saw Ashlan for the first time, man! That was classic! lol. Aha! I bet she\'s originally from this world huh? Hehehe please update soon! This has to be one of my favs that I\'ve read here.

thanks for pointing that detail out to me, i hadn\'t even realized i never described what she looked like. i went back and edited that and put in what she looks like from her perspective. i did that for a few reasons, which i\'m not gonna tell lol.
anyways. thanks for leaving a review. if there is anything like that in any of the other chapters, just let me know and i will try to fix it. :)

No problem. Ohhh red-head huh? How neat.

OHHH!!! I love these types of stories!! Can you please give a more accuarate description of Ashlan. I got the jade eyes things, but what about figure and hair color? Just a suggestion. Please update soon.