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Hey, its great. I really love it, there is absolutely nothing i dislike about this story... yet. Which is really saying something. Good job and PLEASE keep up the good work.

Really good!! I really like your style and its really original =D

Keep writing!

Great read and very eye-opening. Please keep writing. I'll make sure to look out for more of your stuff

This story is so brilliant! I'm so glad to have stumbled upon it ^_~ More please!

I love it! It's an amazing story, and has a wonderful plot. Keep it coming lady, it's great! I love the way that you describe hte facial expressions in nearly every phase of conversation. Most writers just skip over that, and I'm really glad that you didn't. It's a wonderful story! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Pardon my gender misshap. I have a bad habit of reading the story, reviewing, and then going to look at the profile. And once again, lovely story.

Very beautiful written. It really feels like you\'re inside Ethan\'s head instead of just reading random thoughts, as I\'ve often seen in first person POV fics. You balance his high IQ vs his being a regular sixteen year old boy extremely well and your portrayal of events is logical and believable - I\'m at once furious with Ethan\'s mom for siding with his dad and at the same time I know this to be the sad facts in most cases. The conversation between Eathan and Jeremey\'s parent\'s was very poignant, showing his maturity, while both Jeremy and Ethan\'s inexperience with relationships manages to shine through, showing that they have complete personalities. Your characters are instantly endearing (I actually had tears in my eyes when Ethan had the confrontation with his father) and the plot is easy to follow and flows nicely. This is a truly great story and I hope you update soon!

Well didnt know that a boy-boy story would be so interesting. update pleas e=)