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by Draeconin

person taye
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey i just read this story and i have to say that it was great. I dont visit the site alot but this story was great i read it all today it took a while but thatnks for writing it and making it so true. I love the lil facts you gave too... This is a romantic and informative story thanks so much
person redfox9t
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a great story, one of my favorites and you ended it great. I sorry you feel that you didn't get a lot of reviews but you did an amazing job on this fic. Your have a lot of talent in writing and I hope you start a new story soon.
person Fire_Eyez
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and im shocked to see it hasnt gotten many reviews!! i like the fact that its from Ethan's POV and i can understand what hes feeling. Great story and keep it up you're doing a fantastic job.
person Lea
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I can relate to so much in it. Restlessly waiting for the next chapter...
person jess
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. jer is so cute!!!
person Tessa
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I lOVE this story,I CHECK TO SEE IF YOU update everyday PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!
person Anon
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
no more beating!!
person sabre
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! It has a sense of realism that not many stories have. The problems they have at school and the situation with Ethan's family don't make it this fluffy happy story (even though there is enough fluff to make you lough out loud sometimes). Also even though the chances of being taken in by the principle might be low, I like Jeremy's parents. The way Jer's mother deals with her son's love life reminds me of my mother (though my father was never as cool as the principle). I also like your style of writing. I mean first person can sometimes seem very boring (since people always do the same thing with it). I feel you try to make it humorous, but don't overdo to the extent that the story suffers from it due to too little flow, which often happens with first person. Finally I also find the relationship between Ethan and jer believable (sometimes Jer just seems a little too sweet and clingy, but hey I like that). I can't wait to read about these two and how they will progress and mature. Hope you continue with this story for a long time. Great work!
person lady_sady
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still reading and still loving it! Please don't stop
person icecubes123
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much, you are really doing a great job. I hope you update as soon as possiable and write more stories.