rate_review Reviews

I stumbled on this, and read it. Enjoyed it very much so. But had a few questions and wonderings.

 

What happened to Tan's other friends? There was no mention of them. Also, Why zero negative emotions for the fact Graves was responsible for tearing apart his life? If he had kept his nose out of it or kept quiet- anything, really then theoretically Tan could have kept his secret.

 

Obviously, the ending of the story was much better because of what exactly had happened, but I found it odd that there was no emotional backlash... I'm very passed my teen years, but I know if someone had done that to me I would have been very angry- especially as a hormonal confused frightened teenager. The fact there was zero anger, resentment, fury, or even actual irritation was... strange, to me. Especially since how emotional the character ended up being.

 

All in all though. Loved the story, great read, great writing. Thanks for sharing!

Wow. I stumbled onto this story and I have to say I loved it. You did such an amazing job.:) 

THIS IS A WELL WRITTEN AND VERY INTERESTING STORY. A VERY GOOD READ.

Loved this story very much. And the writing was awsome.

epic. a truely awesome fairly realistic considering, story. ty for this.

I saw you on the MainAdultfanfiction.net group and looked up your stories (did that to everyone) because I love to read. But I have to say that this is my first male gay story, first gay story,and I love it.

beautiful. endearing. perfect

hey don't be sad about the lack of respose from people. I loved the story. the only reson people don't review is because they're busy. Anyway i think ur style of writing is incredible. could you plz email me some of the stories that u write? that would be super nice. at ila_rakhi@hotmail.com

I loved this story, I could actually feel the characters emotions, like their embarressment :p
Anyway, I loved the plot, drama, and overall story ^-^ You portray your characters beautifully, and give a sence of a possable real life situation, Awsome story! ;p

I'm sorry I haven't reviewed until now, but I usually don't review until the story is complete. However, I'm now realizing that I'm doing the author a disservice in not reviewing while it's still WIP. To me, it was like talking during a movie. >.>;;. Anyway, I did like the story a lot. I like how Mr. G tried to keep an open frame of mind because he remembered what happened to his brother. How he took that, "I won't do that to my son!" attitude. The characters are really well "drawn" and you did really well with the first person narration. Keep up the good work! Look forward to reading more!