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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mmm delicious. You did a really good job describing the feelings the victim was going through... i really liked the last lines.
It sent chills up and down my spine... great job!
*Silent Writer*
It sent chills up and down my spine... great job!
*Silent Writer*
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written. I wanted to be his victim at the same time that I was struck with horror...and that\'s the way its supposed to feel. You\'ve truly captured the essence of what attracts us to the vampire like moths to a flame.
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November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, a german title. Best way to get my attention.
Morbid is really the best description for the story.
Except "great" of course. I enjoyed reading it. It was so dark yet erotic (somehow).
Compliments...
Morbid is really the best description for the story.
Except "great" of course. I enjoyed reading it. It was so dark yet erotic (somehow).
Compliments...