rate_review Reviews

hey there- i LOVE your story! as soon as i found it, i read it all the way through and i\'ve been checking back for regular updates. i can be lazy about reviewing, but feel the need to reassure you that your writing for the last two chapters has been excellent. i wouldn\'t have noticed the transition from your friend\'s writing to yours apart from the fact that i like yours a little better- the character development in your latest chapter is superb, especially the way you had jacob agonizing over erick in class. you are really good at getting inside someoen\'s head and that will make the story all the more believable as the plot progresses. please keep writing, and stop worrying, you\'re doing an excellent job :D

I can\'t wait till the next chapter! Don\'t worry about time in updating, i usually take ages to update my own. Keep up the exelent work! xx

I love this story... Its written so well.. Makes me want more... Can\'t wait for the updat!!

I really enjoy this story, especially the pacing of the story development. Very believable!

Wow I know what you mean when you say that you\'re hooked on this story. I am too!! Please update asap, Im a bit impatient. Hurry up and give me some lemon please.....or lime. ANYTHING....ok I should keep quiet now. But please update asap!

I really like this story. I felt very sad when your friend stopped it and I thought I wouldn\'t get to see the end...or Jacob and Erik together, lol. I just can\'t wait till you reach chapter eight to see what happens next. You are doing a great job, it must be hard to continue a story someone else started. Thanks for doing that and doing it so well! Great job!

Dear lord this is exelent! I can\'t wait for the next chapter. xxx

great story.been checking everyday for updates

Its amazing how you put this story together.. Keeps me wanting more!!!

Hey person....you have to update soon! Last time I reviewed this story it was on the second chapter. I was glad when I saw that you had updated more than once since. so yeah Im liking this story alot so please update.

- Jeiny