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for Our Humble Little Dwelling

by Shaznay

person Anna Belle
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm waiting for you to uodate this story.
person Nita
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hiya

got to tell ya im really likin this story and hope that there is definitely more to come....where u left it i was like WHAT!!...so i hope that there is more soon....have fun writin

-Nita
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You stopped. You *stopped*! *you* *stopped*! YOU *STOPPED*!!! Just when it was getting interesting!! That's so beyond evil it's in the depth of hell!! I want more! NOW!
person Anon
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
why'd you stop updating?!?!?!?
person Fabi-chan
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED! PLEASE, CONTINUE SOON
person Chrysler
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
“I said, I love you…..damn it.” lol that was cute. This chapter is a perfect example of two wrongs not making a right, but i\'m glad they worked it out. Also glad that Leo and Kyle are getting closer, they\'re too sweet and caring to see some any dilemas brewing their way. Love the ending. Your message was quickly read to me before it was deleted, so i don\'t know what else u said in there, but hope work goes easy on u 2morrow.
person Chrsyler
schedule May 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Everyone\'s just a little liar today huh? I don\'t really get the joke cause i\'ve never seen \'A few good men\' but ....hahahaha! Leo and kyle are so cute, i kept getting keith and kyle confused-just with the names-but i\'m getting better. Update soon puhlease?
person Chrysler
schedule May 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a good chapter, i wouldn;t mind dropping by at the club vince dj\'s at. glad Leo and kyle clicked, it was really cute. More please
person Chrysler
schedule May 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Leo is great, cracks me up. Poor kyle, i hope he comes along so leo might cheer him up. Love the humor, all ur fics make me laugh and \'aww\' ridiculously but their amazing. Can\'t wait to read Chap 3, this just gets better and better.