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March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. I don't know when it was last updated, but I pray that it will be continued.
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February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, you left that one in a bit of a cliffhanger... Good story, but I really hope you'll update soon. ^^
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooooh i like this, are you going to finish it soon? or rather update it, i am SOOOO addicted. :D
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August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think that Keith's pregnancy should be the main theme til the end.
But you should have a side theme with Kyle's relationship with Leo and how it grows.
I think Kyle should get pregnant, sometime later, and have a miscarriage due to the strain of their relationship; because Leo works all the time.
Then you can build up his and Leo's relationship from there.
And show how Keith's pregnancy stengthens his relationship with Vincent.
Well that's just my input. I wouldn't mind if you used the ideas.
Hope to read more soon!
But you should have a side theme with Kyle's relationship with Leo and how it grows.
I think Kyle should get pregnant, sometime later, and have a miscarriage due to the strain of their relationship; because Leo works all the time.
Then you can build up his and Leo's relationship from there.
And show how Keith's pregnancy stengthens his relationship with Vincent.
Well that's just my input. I wouldn't mind if you used the ideas.
Hope to read more soon!
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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! :]
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May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This stories one year anniversary is coming up and I would really love if you updated! I loved this story and I wish it had more reviews like the 'Truth behind the lies', another story which I absolutely love! Hope to read more soon!!!!
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I WANT TO KNOW VINCE'S REACTION TO THE BABY!!!!!!!!!!
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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sweet story so far, I really like it. It needs badly to be updated though lol
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love all your stories but i feel that the fact that you fail to complete most of you stories takes away from your skill as an author. Also i feel like its a big turnoff for readers when they see you dont complete your stories, but also you plan on just beginning more, personally ive lost hope that you will continue stories that have been left behind, especially this one its my fave.
i hope you continue writing and updating you stories to prove me wrong :)
i hope you continue writing and updating you stories to prove me wrong :)
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You did keep us hanging *sulks*
*pokes with stick*
COME BACK AND UPDATE PWEASE 8D
*pokes with stick*
COME BACK AND UPDATE PWEASE 8D