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May 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I read this when you put the first chapter up and almost reviewed...but refrained. I thought that surely someone else would, your story certainly deserves some credit, but no one did...and you\'ve now made me laugh, so I feel the need to comment. You weren\'t kidding when you warned about some possible \'weird stuff\': multiple breasts, girls with cocks, and inventive, never-before-seen ways to mastrubate only the basics.
Yuri doesn\'t get nearly enough love on this site. You don\'t see much of it, the little that you do find is mostly crap, and even the rare good bits are ignored and pushed aside. Your stuff is very sexual, blunt, and has more breasts than I\'m used to (but hey, it\'s yuri, what did I expect?). Still, it\'s worth at LEAST a review...probably more than that, but oh well.
I think I almost have to feel sorry for Christel...I have a feeling Suzanne is not going to let her stay hidden under those cover-me-up-completely clothes for much longer if her mind keeps provided the kind of pictures she just saw of her. I found it amusing that she could just lay there, relaxed as day, while Christel stood there in the doorway blushing up a storm.
My favorite part of this was Suzanne\'s list at the beginning of chapter two...that made me laugh out loud. Especially the end: \"For some reason, none of these theories appealed to her in the least.\" -chuckle- Good job. I hope you keep posting, regardless of how much or how little feedback this gets from the general public. I\'ll be reading it.
-Moonstar
Yuri doesn\'t get nearly enough love on this site. You don\'t see much of it, the little that you do find is mostly crap, and even the rare good bits are ignored and pushed aside. Your stuff is very sexual, blunt, and has more breasts than I\'m used to (but hey, it\'s yuri, what did I expect?). Still, it\'s worth at LEAST a review...probably more than that, but oh well.
I think I almost have to feel sorry for Christel...I have a feeling Suzanne is not going to let her stay hidden under those cover-me-up-completely clothes for much longer if her mind keeps provided the kind of pictures she just saw of her. I found it amusing that she could just lay there, relaxed as day, while Christel stood there in the doorway blushing up a storm.
My favorite part of this was Suzanne\'s list at the beginning of chapter two...that made me laugh out loud. Especially the end: \"For some reason, none of these theories appealed to her in the least.\" -chuckle- Good job. I hope you keep posting, regardless of how much or how little feedback this gets from the general public. I\'ll be reading it.
-Moonstar