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dude, i read the first chapter along time ago, and thought it was great. then a while back i was thinking about this story and couldnt remember where i read it at and whent searching for it, never found it till today by accident!thanks for updating and keep it going.

a very interesting beginning. I hope you get back to this. A tantalizing start --very well written.

Oooh, me likes! Nice beginning; I always like to have my interest peaked from the start, or else I find it hard to continue. In this case, I\'m definitely continuing. Your description of their interaction really dragged me in, and of course my favorite part was Kuriin\'s little blood-sample. In particular, the way you described the elf\'s \'woodsy flavor\' brought out an enticing picture. Both of your characters fascinate me, and I anticipate more. I do hope you update soon? Until then!

-Moonstar

Good start! I\'m interested in seeing where you take this. It would be good to have a little more description of the two men other than elf and vampire, though. It\'s a bit harder to visualize the scene between the two men when there\'s not details to form the picture. Looking forward to the next update