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September 22, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Welll written, lovely story. Wish the preacher would have had the hell beat out of him at least once though.
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very good story.....Loved it!!!
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry it is over but it is everything I had hoped it would be. I very much enjoyed this story. Your descriptions and portrayal of the characters, especially the depth of their feelings for one another was excellent.
Thank you for sharing this with us. I look forward to reading more stories from you and will keep a link to your author page so that I can check back from time to time.
Thank you for sharing this with us. I look forward to reading more stories from you and will keep a link to your author page so that I can check back from time to time.
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you added another chapter. You portray these characters' emotions very well and it appeals to me as a reader.
Although their communication is limited, they still manage to convey their feelings for each other and know that they each care deeply for each other.
Hopefully you will contrive a way to hide Amber so that it looks like Preacher Sade did something to her and the natives don't get blamed. I look forward to reading the next chapter and I hope that you give DaBan and Amber a happily ever after together.
I'm watching for future updates. *grumbles because AFF does not have an email alert system for favorite stories*
Although their communication is limited, they still manage to convey their feelings for each other and know that they each care deeply for each other.
Hopefully you will contrive a way to hide Amber so that it looks like Preacher Sade did something to her and the natives don't get blamed. I look forward to reading the next chapter and I hope that you give DaBan and Amber a happily ever after together.
I'm watching for future updates. *grumbles because AFF does not have an email alert system for favorite stories*
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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, such an unique take on the tale. I love the world you've created. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know anything about notadrachs or t-rex type fantasy creatures. I almost didn't read this story because that type of thing really doesn't appeal to me...I thought.
However, you write very well and have a talent for story-telling and capturing the reader's attention with your descriptions and characterizations. The sex scenes are very erotic and spaced far enough apart for the plot/storyline to develop at a good pace. I've found this story quite enjoyable.
I've bookmarked your story so that I can check for updates. I look forward to reading more soon.
However, you write very well and have a talent for story-telling and capturing the reader's attention with your descriptions and characterizations. The sex scenes are very erotic and spaced far enough apart for the plot/storyline to develop at a good pace. I've found this story quite enjoyable.
I've bookmarked your story so that I can check for updates. I look forward to reading more soon.
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw! So sweet! *sigh* I missed this story. I'm so happy you updated! Love it! :D
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May 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hot stuff!!!
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May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for clearing up De\'ban\'s description =3 Now I can imagine him perfectly XD
Very sweet second chappie ^_^
Hope to see more soon! XD
Very sweet second chappie ^_^
Hope to see more soon! XD
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April 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow~ =3 I like the beginning of this XD
Please update a new chapter soon! ^_^
But could yu describe how the shaman physically looks more??? I can\'t get a good visual =) I just end up picturing some ape and it\'s not a pretty picture >.<
Please update a new chapter soon! ^_^
But could yu describe how the shaman physically looks more??? I can\'t get a good visual =) I just end up picturing some ape and it\'s not a pretty picture >.<