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for The Cheerleaders Continued

by reddragon

person Krys
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
::::bounces happily:::: wheeeeee... I haven't missed that much and I still might get more before my summer break ends!!

Love the story, looking forward to continuations. Keep up the marvelous work!

Later.
person peeter
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i am glad it is back up and i cant wait for the next chapter this story is the best i have read on this site
and i like the plot the up and downs it is a really good story
person Anon
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I fucking loved it.. though, in case you don\'t know, the original archives have been completely transferred, as is your entire cheerleaders story, so you can post into it again.
person footballgoof36
schedule April 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
can\'t wait for the rest of the story. keep up the good work :)
person bobhellbringer
schedule April 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice to see this is still here, can\'t wait to read the next chapters I LOVE IT
schedule April 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmm. I remember reading this and not liking it at all.

lol. I do now.

It has its garish instances and the story is very vacent, as if there\'s no life to it-- even if it has gone through several episodes

I think you should add abit more imagery and magic to your stories because It has no style!

I KNOW this site is some pornographic version of writing but could they at least VARY?



STILL, I have to say, you have one creative head to think of such a story.

Interesting thing, that. Though, I think you have to personalise some of the characters, they\'re all just so static.


lol. I wnjoy reading it though, SO WHY AM i COMPLAINING?



--mrsmarcuscopernicus
person Bubbles
schedule April 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THE STORY’S BACK man I was getting of waiting Great recap cant wait for the next story.

I noticed that you posted Ashley’s stats on the my space page and was wondering if you could do the same for the other characters