rate_review Reviews

amg i luv luv luv this story. love leif's brown eyes with flecks of gold. i want a guy with those eyes! how cat babbles and stumbles and her friends. tyyyy

ahh i love the long chapters too and i looked and i'm sad there's just one more chapter, if not complete, i may beg u to finish however unfair that may be, i love how cat says "ohgods" and ahhh they kissed ahh lol ty so much again. i wish that goofiness would happen to me, again, with a guy with mutual like

what does five by five mean?! i thought ewan and aidin? liked cat in the beginning, aw so cute, he got hit by a soccer ball cuz he was distracted!! and i love that he wants to be her protector and when did cat run into leif in the hall when she was hurt? ahh wondering how the angsty chapter would be, where is the sequel?

OMG this is so good. i love love love it

Aw, this was such a cute story! I rather like the innocent end to it--nothing too heavy or graphic, and it was realistic; sometimes "eternal love" isn't found within all young people. Very well done.

Ohmygosh, hahaha, she's awesome. Love the story so far! :D

omygosh, i don't know where or how to begin to review your writing, cu-kid. so anyway, i always enjoyed reading and becoming engrossed in romance novels, especially the contemportary ones that feature young adults just discovering the love of their lives in the most unexpected of ways. i only recently discovered aff and have been glued to my laptop poring over those uncommon links to true romantic gems. and i gotta say, leif and catlyn do it for me.

i spotted the sequel first. and backtracked because i neeeded to know their past. was surprised that it only consisted of 4 chapters. until the reading began and now it's only hours later that i have taken a break on the last chapter. it's safe to safe that i think i've fallen for leif in almost every single possible way there is for someone to for a fictitious character. haha, you're that good. i'm at that moment when cat realizes it as well. all those agonizing moments where she rethinks herself and the situations, the stream of consciousness in spurts and lyrics, and handful of actual conversations. they're all so believable, and i feel that's the greatest strength you could have in a writer. took soo many pages to finally allow leif that small grin over her 'lightbulb,' and i have to admit i wasn't even sure what you were building up to, but every klutzy episode and emerging smile worked. congrats on a wonderful piece. that i have yet to finish, though am sure to love.

don't stop :)

Hi,
I know, I hate it when people review your story and don't really want to talk about the story - sorry. But well, I didn't know any other way to contact you. (And I really did love your story - it was one of the first ones I read at this side and I couldn't stop till I was through - that was one long night, smile - even though I was really shocked at your first ending - angsty)

Well anyway, if you're still up to it, I'd like to ask you to be the beta reader of my story. I really have problems with the grammar in places, because English is, as you might have guessed not my first language.

Please e-mail me your answer at kittyforyou@hotmail.de

Thank you again for the wonderful story, your offer and the review.

Klio

Your story really took my breath away. I absolutely loved it. The first person-perspective and inner rationalizations really gave Catlyn's character life. Your characters were down-to-earth and quirky, which made them lovable. I especially love how her circle of friends love to pick on her about her neurotic (is that right?) nature.

I...I'm at a loss for words, really. The descriptions and feelings were all...real, I guess, and your story had so much soul. In all honesty, I couldn't just put this down. I HAD to read it all the way through.

This is DEFINITELY going into my favorites list. Drop me a line if you just want to talk about inspiration. Again, congratulations on a job well done, and keep up the superb work!

Okay, well I just finished reading your story, and I must say, I am very disappointed with the ending. I didn't know that this story was going to be Angsty. You should have warned the readers because I suddenly feel the need to curse someone out. But I am not disrespectful or even immature to authors because they take time out of their days, to post there stories. But I will say, please for you own good, you should post a warning. Because unlike me, there ARE immature people that like to flame writers and I don't think that is right at all. I did like the chapters though. They seemed very thought out and well written. Good grammar ans I didn't particularly notice any spelling errors. I especially liked the way you conveyed emotions and actions. Also the characters personalities seemed to complement each other. My only problem is the ending. But like I said, that is MY problem, not yours. Thank you for this amazing story.