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for Dear Mister Manager

by Quirk

person oreade
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Splendid! Well written and hot - I hope you'll continue :)
person fuzzybunnytoo
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, you see I had read most everything you had on here, maybe everything, and I saw this orignal story and thought "Well, why not try a little" It was not but a couple of paragraphs and you had me. Lock stock and barrel. Yep. this is a really good story. And there is some really strange lettering due to the upload and I had to guess at some one the words and I just read through and put the right words in. This wonderful and you have to write another chapter. Do you have it in ya? if you do please e-mail me at Fuzzybunnytoo@yahoo.com because it was hard enough to find it to begin with. Only love for ya, kiddo.
person Lucky_Charms
schedule April 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well you got me, I LOVE it! Please please please keep going this is awesome ^^ very good characters too I love Adair keep writing you\'re doing wonderfully.