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AWWWWW NO. Cute little Gwen... awww.. sooo cute... Carlos you ass, you can't hit a beautiful lady. It's rude.

Oh wow....bye bye to Carlos and good ridance. I could careless now if that man is gone, i'm not sad at all. Waste of her time. Hope you get her someone who will treat her right, who the hell hits a girl? That's just low. Oww, and Robert....love him. Good work.

so i'm guessing she doesn't marry carlos.

NOOOOO! That was horrible, I was holding onto this tiny bit of hope that maybe.....poor Gwen. That asshole! I'm hoping that was just out of shock-though it doesn't justify anything at all- but Gwen...gwen loves him, that's just......i'm so angry. update soon please, though.

That sucks. I knew he would find out eventually and I knew that he probably wouldn't be happy, but I was kind of holding out the hope that since he'd been with her for so long he'd care enough to stop himself and leave before he did anything bad. But I guess not. I guess that also means Robert's going to be let down, because she can't exactly go to the prom all beat up (I'm assuming he beat her up because of the first punch comment). I guess hoping that he won't go out of his way to be nasty and to spread what he knows around would be too much to hope for also. Poor Gwen. I have one question though, something I'd wondered about from the last chapter. Her friend Savananh, the guy she's dating, does he know that she's a transexual or is he also in the dark? *Sigh* I only hope that things get better for Gwen.

You know after reading your story and another story about, I decided to look up Transexuals and the whole surgery and the process they go through. I found this one site. It's actually pretty interesting and quite detailed. It talked about the surgery and showed drawings of each step in the surgery and then it had lots of post-op pictures. And then also several well-known transexuals. They also had a section on post-op sex, which was something I'd wondered about. I wondered if even after surgery they would be able to have an enjoyable sex-life. They go into detail about that and also have a personal account from a woman who went through the procedure. That's a lot to go through (and a lot of money to spend...Wow) but I guess it's worth it in the end to feel like you're who you should be. Oh well. I liked your new chapter, despite Carlos being a big bum and I can't wait for your update to find out the aftermath of the whole situation.

Goodness do I enjoy this story. Haha. I liked how that sounded.

The newfound exhibitionism? In their case, it's a good thing. Poor, Poor horny Carlos *pats his head* But that Morgan scene....I knew it was too early for the secret to come out, but my god my heart was doing 80 in my chest...oh my god....Robert Sr. IS a weird father, that's just scary. A family job sounds more like something for a rite of passage. Atleast he didn't want to watch *shudder* Robert is sooo sweet. Anywho, update soon please. I really, really wanna read the next chapter. More carlos!!!!!! and jealousy.....

That was a really sweet ch. I have to say though that Gwen is playing wiht fire when it comes to Morgan. I can't believe she would risk everything to make money fast.

I love gwen to death, she's sooo sweet. And this was a really good chapter. Though i'm curious to know, will a scene with her and Carlos becoming up soon. Like my name says, I love the man! Oooh, he sounds soo hott!!!! Wish I had me a piece of that. ^_~

Oh wow....I shouldn't get my hopes up, but I was sitting here tearing my hair out thinking Gwen was gonna get killed or something! Whew! what a relief. Update soon please. I'm dying to know what's gonna happen