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HELL YEAH! When's the next chapter coming up?

Yes, I've seen parts of that HBO documentary, and that was very close. I loved it, and it's one of the many reasons I jumped at the chance to read this. I didn't really know much about transgenders, and to be quite honest...I didn't ever think there was a reason to why they wanted to be. I thought they were just "gay" and kinda stupid for wanting to ruin god's artwork BUT, there's always a but. I've had a change of heart and mind, they're both no longer closed to transgenders. I'm not perfectly, you know, open to them yet, but i'm getting there. Cause if you noticed, my first review to you, I had to go back and edit he to she, and when I can or when something is on, I'm read and watch movies and documentaries about transgenders, and like I said earlier, I have a transgendered friend also. I love this fic, and I want Marcus to stick around. Gwen's got something good going for her here, I don't want it to end. I always look forward to happy endings and I hope we get one in this. You are an amazing writer, and thank you for sharing this.

Whoops, sorry! Forget to check Aff.net for your fic, I'm sooo sorry. But glad I did now, because if I wouldn't've know whether you updated or not (I just glance at the first page, cause I hardly come to the original section) well, what can I say? I cannot possibly love Marcus anymore than I do now. Quick, Quick, get them under the sheets. I would love that! lol, Update soon please. Can't wait to see what happens with Gwenie-poo. Lol.

Awwww their so cute.

That Marcus is heaven sent! So glad Gwen bumped into him. I love them together and that song fits Gwen perfectly! So perfectly. Please update soon.

That boy is just tooo cute! Now i'm thinking, Carlos who?

Fuck Carlos, I definetly want Marcus with Gwen. I'm glad Robert and Gwen had an interesting...moment with each other, lol. It's sad to see him go, but who could turn down Yail? Robert's a good kid, I like him. And I'm so happy Gwen's almost got enough money. I don't want another episode like Carlos from Marcus-though I doubt it-but I hope he doesn't find out she's a guy...or atleast is more accepting when he finds out she is. I know he's good news though, I can feel it. Bring on more!

Good ol' savannah! And robert too, gotta love them both. Glad she's there for Gwen in her time of need. And I hope greatly to see Gwen fully happy soon. Great update

AWWWWWWWWWW!!!!! I love Robert's character. A lot of women refuse to go for guys like him, instead looking for men like Carlos, but the Robert's in the world are the best guys out there. I would actually love it if Gwen went for him, he accepts her as she is so she wouldn't have to worry. Though his father might not be too happy that his son wants to be involved with a transgendered call girl. But it would be sweet I think and she'd finally have someone who loved her. Now I'm really rooting for the two of them.

This chapter did an excellent job of incorporating Savannah's character in a big way. It's great to see the great friendship that prevails over the struggle. Poor Gwen. I hope through the heartache and pain, Robert becomes an even greater help to Gwen. Wonderful update.