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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I was unsure of this story because of some people perception of gender dysporia. I've tried to read a couple of others that pop up on aff.net but they never turn in to anything I'd enjoy reading. This was amazing. It. . . it just really worked. You're a great writer and you even managed to make you're ending inspirational. I'm glad I was able to read it. I'd appreciate it if you left it on aff.net for forever because this is now under my favorites and I would love to be able to come back and read it many more times in the future.
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The cooking part where Gwen made the cake with salt instead of suger reminds me of my little mistake with koolaid or whatever its called. lol. It was a hot day! SO I was eight and my mother said 'lets make juice' so we grabed the last bag of juice and got the suger out and made it nice and sugery with ice cubes and everything. I was so proud of myself! And then I took a slip and... spat it alll out...
To say the least my mother said "Well... now why are you wasting all that jucie!" So she took a long gulp and then promply ran to the washroom with tears in her eyes. Damn all the salt in the world! lol. Loved the story so far! Its such a beautiful piece of work that I hope you carry on with it!
To say the least my mother said "Well... now why are you wasting all that jucie!" So she took a long gulp and then promply ran to the washroom with tears in her eyes. Damn all the salt in the world! lol. Loved the story so far! Its such a beautiful piece of work that I hope you carry on with it!
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was such an adorable chapter. Things are going so well that I know disaster is just right down the corner. I can feel it, yet i'm dreading it. Marcus is such a blessing so I hope this has nothing to do with him at all. But anything that affects Gwen is gonna kill me so....please update soon!
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
When it was the 'I love you' part I was all like "SAY YES SAY YES!" waving my arms around like a crazy person and I hit my fan off of the "cow designed fan holder thingymcbober" and it fell on to the floor. I stared at it for a moment then went back to reading. After reading a sentence I looked at where my fan was because I was all happy and I was getting heated up because I was bouncing up and down(!) and I was all like "Where's my fan?"
Funny. But true.
Funny. But true.
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Scribbles05, almost did not read it and now so happy I did. Cool story, very realistic. Thanks for an update.
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
He can't get any better. He's gone there and back, he just cannot get any better than he is now. He accepts Gwen, they have great sex, he's funny, sweet, takes her out to nice restaurants....what more can you ask for in a man. *sigh* If only there were men like that where I live.
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhh! I love this fic!
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY.. I was about to say if you fucking hit him I'll fucking kill you. In a gangster kind of way.
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I fucking love you!!!!!!!!
Do you have any idea how hard it is to find stories like this..........I love it....Its perfect
Now You Better Add A Chapter Soon Or Ill Come To Your House And I Will Cut You!!!!!
LOL
Loved It
-SailentRose
Do you have any idea how hard it is to find stories like this..........I love it....Its perfect
Now You Better Add A Chapter Soon Or Ill Come To Your House And I Will Cut You!!!!!
LOL
Loved It
-SailentRose
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Give me a second....I'm still cracking up over BJ. Damn, Lol. You also almost gave me a heart attack, I was so scared along side Gwen (even though...yeah) . I would steal Marcus if I could, honest to god, I love that man. So sweet, funny, sexy, real,....the whole package. I don't doubt for a second that it was glorious.