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Way to end a chapter. I love it. I wonder what is Marcus's job. Keep up the good work and keep updating.

Wow, finally you updated after 3 months. But I love this chapter. I think Carlos is a jerk and I was happy that Marcus did that to him but I still think that Marcus is hiding something and was wrong not to tell Gwen about his job. I also like how Savannah cheered up Gwen. She is a good friend.

please don't take forever to update the next chapter.

wow, it's been a while! so glad to have you back. carlos is a slime ball! just because he's miserable he has to take everyone down with him. i do have to admit that i am curious about what exactly marcus does.

Great story, and fun to read. Well written, and it holds you in thrall while reading, or at least it did me.

My only thing is, transgender, transexual, and all that, is whack. I don't think them freaks, or anything, just highly stupid. You're born as you are, deal with it. If you're born a guy, and don't feel comfortable around guys, and don't feel like a guy, then maybe you're not a 'guy'. Big whoop. Most guys aren't guys. But changing your entire sex/gender because of the way you feel? Stupid.

Meh, but still, fun story.

I'm so happy that you finally updated. I was jumping with joy screaming "yes". This chapter was so sweet but I think there is something going on with Marcus. Anyway, keep up the great writing and please update when you can.

Nice. I hope he's not cheating on her.

I don't know why it took me so long to read this story, especially considering how much I loved your other stories^-^ I just read all 16 chapters in one sitting o-o I'm tired......

This is soo good. hopefully you'll update this again soon...since you put Truth on hold.

I don't know if you've ever seen the movie Soldier's Girl (If you haven't you should go rent it right now. It's awesome and I think you'd like it.) but everytime I envision Savanah she looks just like Calpernia's friend (can't remember her name =\ ) in my mind.

And I've noticed quite a few similarities between Gwen and Shay. It's kind of weird sometimes. ^-^

Keep up the amazing work! You should consider publishing something, I'd totally buy it! ^________________^

I really loved this story. It is so good and different. I like Gwen. She seems like me a little bit. I never seemed to fit in anywhere. I also love Savannah. She is a trip but that is good that Gwen has a friend like her. Keep up the great writing and please update when you can.

WOW, you're on a roll. two updates at teh same time. awesome