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I so adore these two together and now you have whetted our curiousity about Chance's past. Another wonderful addition :)

Oh my goodness... I don\'t think there is a single reader out there who doesn\'t love that little bunny boy. He absolutely melts your heart with his adorable appearance and natural innocence. I think Vincent and he are as close to perfection as a pairing can be. This was such a lovely story and I think the subject, other than their sweet love making, was a very touching one. Once again your poetically beutiful writing style describes us an amazing ambience and the attention to detail is simply great. We\'re lucky to have you.

Squee! ^^ So cuuuute! I\'m glad you still kept Chance as quiet and innocent as possible...I know he needed to try a little more forthcoming in this one...but I just CAN\'T see him being to pushy...he\'s just not like that. I don\'t care if he\'s a pleasure slave; he\'s innocent I tell you! Innocent!! xD ^^ And I absolutely love him that way too. You portray both he and Vince wonderfully...cause I love Vince too! xD He\'s awesome in the shmexy badass sort of way...but it\'s just such a gorgeous contrast to the fluffy ball of innocent fur. ^^ Not to mention of course...Chance is just obviously perfect for Easter...xDD

I\'m now sort of wishing I did an Easter fic...but I really didn\'t even THINK of it until I saw yours! xD (Pathetic, no?) Oh well...I\'m busy enough on my own I suppose. xP Anyway! Terrific job, as usual. I think I\'d like to see some sort of longer Chance and Vincent story sometime? You\'ve got all these little shorts built up now...and I\'m really getting a feel for their characters...but it\'s only one short little smut chap at a time! xD (No complaints on the smut.) But I\'d like to get more of them. I can really see you\'ve probably got a whole story out there...and I want to know all there is to know about them!

Until next time. ^^

-Moonstar

*Squeals and dances around*

I LOVED IT!!! You took a nice angle on this, and for a relationship such as theirs, Vincent would wonder if Chance was his because of \"ownership\" or because of love. The small details were awesome: Vincent making a small flame, Chance being wrapped in the fluffy towel, Vincent stuffing his hand under the pillow when he couldn\'t sleep. This was put together so beautifully...

And now I want to know more about Chance. Are there plans for a revelation?

Hey! That was amazing. I love Chance. I\'m really sick today but reading this made me forget all of that... until now. Thanks for being a great writer who\'s able to make me even forget that I\'m sick. ^^ . You rock. XD

<3 Michelle

Very well written, and when this archive settles down finally, I will add at least one of your stories to my Rec\'s. I read this without knowing who these boys were, but I pretty much understood most of what was going on through the narrative. Lovely males...yum. Nice erotic scenes and good detail without being overly graphic. (and no retarded dirty talk either--I hate when an author inserts weird phrases that character\'s say during sex...) Anyway, I will be checking out your other stories soon, just wanted to leave a review.

~Carrie