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Oh nuts. Two hotties and one sweet boy... Who do you pair up?! ...Maybe Drake and Cyprien can share? That might kill Teige o_O Love your story, although Drake needs to get kicked in the shins... Is Teige going to be molested more? He was screaming so I can only suspect... XD Anyway! Can\'t wait to find out what happens next :3 Love!

you are still keeping me utterly on the edge of my seat. i am so happy to see cyprien is back! it\'s also wonderful to see teige acting more and more fiesty- what a character he is! after all of that, he still manages to keep his spirits. can\'t wait to find out what the commotion was about in the next chapter. more, more! :P :)

I\'ve been checking daily to see if you\'ve updated, glad to see you\'re still here *hugs*

Great chapter, love Davinoff\'s reactions to Teige, especially his voice. Might wicked cliff-hanger you\'ve left us with. Please don\'t keep us in suspense too long.

Update! Update! *Does the happy Update Dance* Which is actually a fairly terrifying thing to see...

Great new chapter! You had some especially beautiful descriptive passages in this one. I loved the opening paragraph, where you talked about the colors of dawn catching in Teige\'s hair, and conjured the image of him with the half-eaten poisoned apple lying near his outstretched hand. So sensual and evocative. And then later, when Drake was out in the woods hunting, and heard Teige singing. I was so happy we got to hear Teige sing again! (As you may have noticed, I kind of have a thing about men who can sing.) Music has so much power, so much capacity for expressing things deeper than mere words, and I thought you captured that wonderfully.

Drake and Teige have developed a nice rapport. I notice that in his more \"tender\" moments, Drake has slipped back into calling Teige \"princess\". Hmmm. Definitely a sign of cracks beginning to form in his emotional wall. It\'s nice to see that Teige continues to hold his own with words, even if he can\'t hold a sword.

And this line totally cracked me up:

\"“Strong silent type. Got it.\"

Thanks for updating!

Love,
Falcon

Ahhh... a cliffhanger! Why am I not suprised *looks accusingly at Moonstar* Although, as a fellow writer, I know how tempting it is to end on that note. Now I can\'t wait for the next chapter. I\'m figuring it\'s either something rediculously silly that has Teige screaming, like a snake or something, or it\'s time for our heros to find out that Cyprien\'s still alive. Either way, I\'m eagerly anticipating the next update ^_^

Good to see an update to this one, though you left us with a cliffhanger...argh! Hopefully the next chapter will be forthcoming soon. I wonder how long Teige was with Cyprien truly (from the last chapter where the other vampire was confused when the boy said how long he thought he had been with him). And with Tiege having problems eating real food, sounds like the vampire\'s been feeding off of him for a very long time - maybe even slowly turning him. Good job and looking forward to the next update.

Cyprien\'s still alive? Well, I didn\'t see that coming. Things are about to get *very* interesting, no? Good chapter, and I can\'t wait to see what happens next!

Oooh! So many intriguing things happening in this chapter. I loved all the little hints you placed -- Teige\'s adversion to food, his attraction to the night. Seems like he may have a bit of vampire in him now, which is certainly an interesting twist. And Cyprien actually has a heart! Who would have thought it? It certainly opens the door to a very delicious love triangle. I wonder if Teige would go back to him if he asked? I wonder a lot of things, actually, and can\'t wait for the next update!

Oh, and nice description of Drake undressing. Yummy!

Love,
Falcon

Your story just keeps getting better with more exciting twists and turns that leave me glued to the computer screen begging for more. Now I know why my eye sight is so bad, from reading fics all day lol. Ok lemme guess because to me it sounds like Teige is a Vampire OOooooo (gasp) is it true is it true. *Shakes you* Also I cannot believe Cyprien is still alive, that was a complete shocker. Now though I view Cyprien alot differently, it looks like he really does care for Teige although I am torn between Cyprien and Davinoff now. Please don\'t make Davinoff a bad guy. *Begs on knees* *Pleads* Can\'t wait for more. See you soon

I really like it! How long was Teige stuck in the tower? Did he have family? Either I wasn\'t paying attention or I would really really like to know (meaning: KEEP WRITING !!!! please? )
Thanks,