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June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I especially loved the line about looking at Arachna makes the growing problem in his pants all better. LOLOL That was a fantastic zing. It\'s good that he\'s finally beginning to realize his feelings for the boy. And the vampire being obsessed but refusing to believe it\'s love promises to bring a clash of titans in future chapters. Looking forward to the next update.
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June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have read through all eight chapters in one sitting, and I must say; this story friggin\' rox my sox! :)
I can\'t wait for more!
I can\'t wait for more!
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June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that last line was a little harsh. Poor Queen, I almost feel sorry for her *LOL*
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June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It\'s always great to find a excelent fic and it\'s a bonus if the author updates regularly! I\'m so glad to have stumbled on this story. You have a very descriptive way of writing which is very engaging and your characters are immediately endearing. Just one question, in chapter 5 it sort of seemed like Teige (love that name by the way) was / is being turned? I kind of hope that\'s not the case, but hey it\'s your story ^_~ I can\'t wait for the next update!
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June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another appearance by Cyprien! I enjoyed his reaction to having his emotions described as \"puppy love\". The examples of human \"puppy love\" that he gave were really evocative. I do wonder what he\'s up to, trailing around after Teige. Waiting for Teige to turn, perhaps?
Poor Drake. He really is so very, VERY gay. And so very, VERY deeply in denial. I love him for it, the poor bastard. You really made us feel bad for him when he was forced to kiss the elven queen. I\'m sure he\'d have been happier if she\'d just made him fight a dozen giant spiders instead.
I loved the line about the silk shirt fitting Drake like tissue paper on a rock. And this line totally cracked me up: \"If she had told him to wear a pink tiara and impersonate a flamingo...\" Such a wonderfully absurd image! You really have a very deft touch when it comes to humor.
Can\'t wait for more!
Love,
Falcon
Poor Drake. He really is so very, VERY gay. And so very, VERY deeply in denial. I love him for it, the poor bastard. You really made us feel bad for him when he was forced to kiss the elven queen. I\'m sure he\'d have been happier if she\'d just made him fight a dozen giant spiders instead.
I loved the line about the silk shirt fitting Drake like tissue paper on a rock. And this line totally cracked me up: \"If she had told him to wear a pink tiara and impersonate a flamingo...\" Such a wonderfully absurd image! You really have a very deft touch when it comes to humor.
Can\'t wait for more!
Love,
Falcon
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June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying the story so far. Teige\'s sense of humor is great, and I sympathize with his whole \"Stockholm Syndrome\" issue. Loved the last line in this chapter.
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June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! If you have an update list, please add me!
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June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another strange and interesting twist. Not that I\'d expect anything less from you ^_^ Can\'t wait for the next update!
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June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
not bad more please wat happen next
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June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, giant spiders are good -- there\'s nothing creepier than giant spiders. (Except maybe snakes. *Shudders*)
Great update! The combat was very nicely described, especially the grotesqueness of it. You really made us feel Teige\'s horror and repulsion. And I loved the way that Teige overcame his fear in time to help Drake defeat the giant spider -- by singing it a lullaby. You did a good job of setting that up, so that when Teige thought of singing, it felt like the perfect solution. It\'s cool to see Teige continuing to grow and develop into someone who can be a true partner for Drake.
But now Drake is going to be dragged off and subjected to the horrors of heterosexual sex! (And then probably eaten, if I remember my spider lore...) I can\'t imagine how our heroes are going to get out of this one, but you certainly have me on the edge of my seat. Update soon!
Love,
Falcon
Great update! The combat was very nicely described, especially the grotesqueness of it. You really made us feel Teige\'s horror and repulsion. And I loved the way that Teige overcame his fear in time to help Drake defeat the giant spider -- by singing it a lullaby. You did a good job of setting that up, so that when Teige thought of singing, it felt like the perfect solution. It\'s cool to see Teige continuing to grow and develop into someone who can be a true partner for Drake.
But now Drake is going to be dragged off and subjected to the horrors of heterosexual sex! (And then probably eaten, if I remember my spider lore...) I can\'t imagine how our heroes are going to get out of this one, but you certainly have me on the edge of my seat. Update soon!
Love,
Falcon