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for Prince Charming

by AnihyrMoonstar

person Dee
schedule April 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Teige is just such a touching character and you can just feel his sadness. The way you describe him is also wonderful he sounds so delicate like a porcelain doll. What I didn\'t get is that is he hates Cyprien so much why did he cry so much when Davinoff killed him. And I am extremly curious to find out what will happen when Davinoff finally realized that Teige truly is a boy.
person Sjonna
schedule April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, Daninoff (forgive spelling please) is going to get a surprise about the vampire-guarded \"maiden\" if he lives long enough. Nice beginning. Can\'t wait to read more.
schedule April 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry it took me so long to review, RL keeps getting in the way.

I like your new fic, it\'s an old story with some interesting new twists. Vampires and crossdressers? You know I love a boy in a dress *LOL* Please post more soon, because you left me wanting more and I can\'t wait to see what happens next.
person rachel80
schedule April 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh, please update soon, soon! :D this story is so compelling and addictive, i really can\'t wait to see what happens next. the intensity between these two characters is amazing. flat out magnificent writing!
person midnighteyes
schedule April 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really like the story... I do hope you update it soon.. Can\'t wait for more!!!
schedule April 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Moonstar! I\'ve missed your writing SO MUCH! It\'s wonderful to have you back with us. This new story is absolutely fantastic. I adore your gorgeous, evocative language. When you describe Teige -- his long dark hair, pale skin, and \"feathery black eyelashes\" -- it paints such a beautiful picture inside my head. Very sexy stuff. And I love the idea of him being dressed up like a princess and used as bait to lure knights to their doom. I can almost hear his tragic siren songs echoing through the chill night air. I\'m definitely glad to know that you have more of this written, because I can\'t wait for the update.

And I look forward to reading more of \"Black Panther\", too.

Love,
Falcon
schedule April 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very good start - it was intense right from the beginning. The details are exquisite and I look forward to reading more of this

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